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"Damnit, I didn't lose any of it" I said, looking at the scale.

I was chubby, that's all I really need to say. I've been trying to lose some weight for awhile now, but it doesn't seem to work. It doesn't help that Alola region is perfect for beach bodies. When the professor of the region has a tan and six-pack, you know you're doing something wrong. I've been trying to work losing this weight I have, but it just doesn't want to disappear. I sighed as I sat back down on my bed, excepting my fate. If only there was a way for me to magically lose all this weight, then I would be happy. Then it struck me, quite literally. A book had fallen out of my bookcase and onto my foot. I picked it up and read the title. Legends of Alola. I began to read through it, out of curiosity. It was mostly filled with legends about the legendary Pokemon of Alola, Solgaleo and Lunala, but I found an interesting section on the Tapu's. It was said that the Tapu's could grant wishes. Then I had an idea, maybe I could go to a Tapu shrine and make a wish to lose all this weight. I got up from my bed, new determination having been found, and left to go make my wish.

Getting to the Shrine was relatively easy. I lived on Akala Island so it wasn't the most difficult thing to access. At least I didn't live on Ula'ula Island where you had to traverse a literal desert just to get to the shrine. When I reached the Shrine, I walked up to it, closed my eyes, and made my wish. "I wish I could lose all this weight and could have the perfect body" I said. I waited there for a few minutes, but nothing happened. "I should've known it was a bunch of crap" I said, walking out disappointed. 

On the walk back, I began to get the feeling that I was being watched. I tried to ignore the feeling but it was just there, and it annoyed me. Then, I heard something come from the bush. "W-Who's there" I said, nervously looking around. Then something came out of the bush. It was just a regular old Salandit. "Phew, thought it was something dangerous" I said, getting ready to move on. Just when I was about to get moving, a whole bunch of other Slandits appeared, surrounding me. "Am I being ambushed" I said to myself, waiting to see what the Salandits were planning. Weirdly, instead of attacking me they started to move around me, like they were doing some kind of ritual. Suddenly, there was a flash of light, and I felt something zap my body. It was light, but just noticeable. When my vision returned, I noticed the Salandits were sitting there, like they were waiting for something to happen. I then felt a tingling sensation in my hand. I brought my hand up to my face and was shocked to noticed black scales growing all over my hand.

"W-What the hell" I said, trying to process what had happened. The scales began to move up my arm, dramatically slimming it in the process. I watched as the same happened to my other arm. I quickly went to take my shirt off, when I saw the scales slip under there. The scales began to cover my chest, changing to an blueish color at my chest. I watched in shock as all the fat on my body, simply disappeared. I watched the scales then cover my back, as I felt my butt inflate outwards. I then felt a sucking sensation at my crotch, and before I knew it, I was now female. My legs shortened as the scales covered them, leaving me much shorter than I used to be. I felt my feet begin to expand, bursting out of my shoes. I noticed my feet had shifted and looked a lot like my hands. The scales then looped back around and went up to my head. I started to cough, my voice becoming higher with each cough. My face then pushed out into a long snout, and all the hair then fell off of my head, ending the transformation.

I looked at my new body, realizing I had now become a Salazzle. "Yay, our queen is back" I heard on of the Salandits say. I was surprised I could understand them, but then again I was also a Pokemon. "Queen" I asked, confused. "We heard your wish for a perfect body, so we gave you this body and made you our queen" Another one added. Well this body is fit for a queen I heard a voice say from within my head. Yeah, I guess I do look pretty nice. Maybe you should go with them, they did give you this body. But, what my family. They're your family now. But I'm human. Now, now, you WERE human, now you're a Salazzle, and you are their queen. I am their queen. I felt the last of my ugly human self dissolve away into nothingness. Now the Salazzle side could rule. "Come on now, lets get back to our kingdom" I told my subjects. I began to walk back, when I noticed the clothes of my former human self, laying on the ground. I spat a small ball of fire at them, burning them away. I didn't need anyone wondering where I disappeared off to. When we reached my kingdom, the slandits worshiped me like a goddess. I smiled.

"I could get used to this"  
Here's a commission for :icongoldsnakes: I tried a little something different with the MC, I hope you like it and I'll see you guys next time!
goldsnakes Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly what i was thinking, good job.
pokesonicfanthomas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2017
Thank you
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