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Fallen Down (Reprise): Toriel TF/TG/MC

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Unnamed Undertale TF Saga Reboot

Chapter 1: Fallen Down (Reprise)

Everything around me was disappearing.

I had no idea what was going on, or where I was for that matter, but it obvious that the entire word was disappearing. My thoughts were in a complete panic, and I had a massive headache, leaving me extremely confused. I watched as the fields around me disintegrate into darkness, like the entire world was ending.

Soon, it reached me, and I was sent into complete darkness.

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“Hey! Earth to Thomas! You in there!”

My mind returned to world of consciousness, and I noticed I was sitting at a table in a restaurant. “Dude, you fine?” A red-haired kid, who was sitting across from me, said. “Yeah, just blanked out for a sec, just give me a moment” I said, standing up and stretching. I needed to clear my mind and catch my bearings after what I just saw.

I started with the basic information. My name is Thomas. I’m 15 and going into the 10th grade. Now where I was at the moment? I was at a Wendy’s going to the beach with my Church Youth Group. The person I was just talking to was my friend Zack, and a couple of my other friends were here as well.

“You good now” Zack asked. “I think so” I said, sitting back down. “Well, I’m gonna go get a frosty, you coming” Zack asked. “Yeah hold on, just let me grab my wallet” I said. I looked out the window and into the parking lot. I could see the van we were travelling on, in the distance. The sun was also starting to set, leaving the sky a beautiful orange. I thought back to that weird vision, or dream, or whatever the hell it was, I suddenly had. I could barely even tell what was going during it other than the world being destroyed or something. “Jeez, I should stop playing so many video games” I said to myself, grabbing my wallet.

“Is it just me, or do these frosties get better every time I have one” I said, walking out of the Wendy’s. “It’s probably just you” Zack said, following shortly behind me. “I don’t know Zack, frosties are one of the best parts about Wendy’s” Reid, a fellow youth member and one of my best friends, said. “Other than their Twitter account” Colin, another friend of mine, added to Reid’s statement. “Don’t remind of that cancerous account” Zack said, walking towards the van. “Honestly Zack, at this point you just use the word cancerous to describe stuff you don’t like” I said. “I don’t, it just happens to be that there are a lot of cancerous stuff in the world” Zack said. “Yeah, like actual Cancer, and possibly the FNAF or Undertale fandom” Reid said.

“Thomas, weren’t you in the Undertale fandom last year or something” Colin said. “Don’t remind me, one of the worst internet experiences I’ve ever had” I said. “You were so into it though, you knew like everything about the game and listened to the soundtrack like 24/7, it was really weird” Colin said. “Says the man, with a crippling Zelda addiction” I replied, getting inside the van. Other youth members were already in the van waiting on us. There was Ross, someone who could probably tell you anything about a bunch of weird subjects, Nick, someone who has a bit of a temper, and Brian, someone who barely talks to anyone and was probably forced to go on this trip.

With everyone piled into the van, we took to the road, and almost 5 seconds later everyone forgot this was a social trip and took to their phones, including myself. I was getting tired so I decided to listen to some music and take a small nap, considering it would be around 10pm when we actually got there.

I scrolled through the various playlists on my phone, trying to figure out what music to listen to. Persona? Nah, I’m not in a J-Pop mood. Fire Emblem? Eh, I’ve exhausted that playlist to death. Anime Trash that I should be embarrassed to have on my phone? Usually yes, but I don’t feel like falling asleep to a different language. I eventually reached the end of playlists and saw one I hadn’t listened to in almost over a year, my Undertale Jams. “Shit, I forgot this was even on my phone, could’ve sworn I left out Undertale when transferring music between Phones” I said to myself. I decided to listen to the playlist considering I wasn’t in the mood for anything else, and it had been awhile since I last listened to it.

I put in my earbuds, leaned back, closed my eyes, and pressed play on the playlists. As the soothing 8-Bit sounds of Undertale’s opening cutscene played, I felt a weird sense of nostalgia for a game that had only been out for about 1 ½ years. Putting my nostalgia feelings aside, I quickly found myself falling asleep, as I entered the realm of dreams.

Now I usually don’t have weird dreams (The weirdest I can remember was a Metroid related dream I had when I fell asleep playing AM2R), but for some reason, I found myself in the middle of one of my weirdest dreams yet. First of all, I found myself in what seemed like a younger, and definitely not human, body, running around a garden with another child who was wearing a striped sweater (I couldn’t make out the color due to me fading in and out of consciousness, I blame the position I was sleeping in). Before I could make out anything else, the world around me disappeared in a similar fashion to the dream-like vision I had at the Wendy’s. Once more, I was consumed by darkness.

My eyes cracked open as I returned from my deep sleep. I got up and stretched my arms, looking outside the window to see where we were. It was pitch black outside. “Jeez, how long was I sleeping” I said to myself, yawning. “Hey Zack, what time is it” I said, turning around. To my surprise, Zack was sleeping, along with everyone else in the van. “Okay, that’s…weird” I said. I turned to driver, who was the only one awake besides me. “Hey, what time is it” I said. “The End is Near” He said. “Uh, that’s not a time” I replied, weirded out. “The End is Near my prince, soon your kingdom will be yours” He said. “What the hell, am I still dreaming” I asked myself. Suddenly the driver turned around, revealing a soulless grin, and empty eye sockets. “STILL DREAMING STILL DREAMING” I yelled, panicking. The driver opened his mouth to scream, but instead let out an, airhorn noise?

I jolted awake, for real this time, to the sounds of Zack and Reid laughing. I looked at them and noticed the airhorn app open on Zack’s phone. It didn’t take me long to realize what had happened. “Not funny dude, I was trying to sleep” I said. “Sorry, I couldn’t help myself” Zack said, laughing. “Besides, you can sleep all you want when we get there” Reid said. “Whatever, just don’t try that again” I said, pausing the Undertale playlist on my phone. “No promises” Zack said.

I leaned back and considered going back to sleep, but knowing Zack, he’d probably pull that prank again. Knowing that, I decided to just lean back and look out the window. My mind immediately went to the strange dream I had. Not only was it two dreams in one, but it was also very weird and cryptic. What the hell was the dream-driver even talking about? I decided to stop thinking about it, passing it off as just a ‘weird dream’.

About 2 hours later we arrived at the place we were staying at. It was a medium sized, 2 story house, large enough to fit all of us. I stepped out of the van and was finally able to stretch my legs for the first time in like, 4 hours. “Finally, freedom” I heard Reid say. We got all our stuff out of the bus, and went to the rooms we were staying in. “Man, I can’t wait to explore the ruins” Colin said, putting his stuff on his bed. “Yeah, too bad you can’t do that while it’s dark out” I said, laying out my sleeping bad. “Yeah, but I’m still excited” Colin said. “Let me guess Colin, you only want to explore the ruins so you can feel like Link” Zack said. “Hey, that’s only half of why I want to” Colin replied. “Knew it” Zack said, laying on his bed.

“Hey guys, I’m getting hungry, let’s see if there’s anything to eat here” Reid said, rubbing his stomach. “That’s a great idea” Zack said, immediately getting out of his bed. “Uh, guys, we just got here, there shouldn’t be any food” Colin said. But it was too late, as Zack and Reid had already left the room. “Don’t worry, I’ll get them” I said. “Ok, I’ll go explore around the grounds for a bit, I won’t be long” Colin said, walking outside. “Okay, just try not to get lost” I said. I went into the Kitchen to get Zack and Reid, and found them hunched over the open door to the fridge.

“See, I told you there wasn’t any food yet” I said. “Actually, you’re wrong” Reid said. “Wait what” I said, running over to the fridge. Inside the fridge was a lone piece of Butterscotch Pie, with a note attached to it. “Let me see that” I said, grabbing the note off the Pie. I opened the note and read it out loud to Zack and Reid.

Dear whoever is using this house next,

I thank you for deciding to choose this place as your beach house. As a way to show my thanks, take this free piece of Butterscotch Pie, on the house.

Thanks,

The Owner

“Well that’s awfully generous” Reid said, walking away from the fridge. “I thought you were hungry” I said. “Yeah, but I’m not the biggest fan of Butterscotch Pie” Reid said. “So you don’t want any of it” Zack said, looking over the fridge door. “Yeah” Reid said. “Alright, all mine then” Zack said, snatching the pie out of the fridge. “Wait Zack, I thought you hated Pie” I said. “First time for everything” Zack replied, sitting down at a nearby table. “Wow, are you really that hungry” Reid said. Zack nodded. “Well, whatever, I’m gonna go take a shower, I’m really sweaty from the ride up” I said. “Same here, enjoy your pie” Reid said, as we walked out of the room.

“Think he’ll like it” I asked Reid. “He’ll probably spit it out after his first bite and regret all of his life decisions” Reid replied. “Yeah, probably” I replied.

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“Alright, here I go” Zack said, taking a bite out of the butterscotch pie. Almost 2 seconds later, Zack spit out the piece of pie, regretting all of his life decisions. “And suddenly I remember why I don’t like pie” Zack said, standing up to go put the pie back in the fridge.

When Zack stood up, he felt a slight breeze go through the room, which was weird since none of the windows were open. “You know, maybe one more bite won’t hurt” Zack said, suddenly changing his mind. Zack sat back down, and grabbed his fork and took another bite out of the pie. It tasted much better this time. Zack quickly ate the rest of the pie. “Wow, I never knew something could taste this good” Zack said, leaning back in the chair, a warm feeling spreading throughout his body.

However, the warm feeling was not from the satisfaction of eating pie (sadly), but from the white fur that was now growing on Zack’s body. Zack didn’t notice this however, as he was too busy feeling satisfied from eating a piece of pie.

The fur continued to grow across his body, his arms slimming out, looking much more feminine. The fur grew across Zack’s chest, as it pushed out into a small set of breasts. Zack’s body shifted appropriately to this change, his hips expanding outwards, while his waist inwards, giving him an hourglass shape. There was a quick burning sensation in Zack’s crotch, as his male privates were quickly replaced with the others, making him more of a her.

The fur continued to Zack’s legs, with them slimming out, much like her arms. However, instead of her feet getting smaller, they began to grow bigger, stretching Zack’s shoes to the limits, until they burst open, revealing large paws where human feet once were. Zack still didn’t notice anything, accept she was no longer wearing shoes, which didn’t bother her.

The changes quickly made their way to Zack’s face, fur consuming the entirety of her face, causing her hair to fall out. Zack felt a slight tugging sensation on her face, as a small muzzle appeared just at the bottom of her vision. Zack’s ears also moved slightly up, becoming longer and droopier. To complete the changes on her face, two small horns grew out of Zack’s forehead. However, the transformation was not over, as Zack’s clothing began to change.

First, her shirt and pants merged into one, becoming some sort of robe. The robe darkened, turning purple, as an insignia appeared on the chest. Long white sleeves then rolled out from under the robe, covering Zack’s arms, completing the transformation. Zack was now the splitting image of Toriel, a character from Undertale.

It was at this moment, that Zack was released from the pie-induced trance, and quickly noticed what has happened to her body. “W-What the f**k just happened to me!!” Zack said, freaking out. Zack didn’t have long to search these changes, as she suddenly had a piercing headache, as new memories flooded in. Zack, realizing what was happening, began to panic. “N-no, I don’t want to die here, these aren’t my memories, this isn’t me” Zack said, holding her head, trying to keep her old memories intact. Zack was sadly fighting a losing battle, as his memories were quickly taken over by that of Toriel, the former queen of the underground.

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“Aaah, that was a great shower” I said, putting on a fresh T-Shirt. “Yeah, I feel so much better now” Reid said, climbing onto the top bunk of the bed we were sharing. “I’m gonna go check on Zack and see how this whole BS Pie situation worked out” I said, walking out of the room. “Ok, tell me how much he ate” Reid said. “No promises” I replied.

As I walked towards the kitchen, I noticed Brian in his room all alone. I peeked my head in to check on him. “Hey, how ya doing” I said to Brian. Brian looked up from his phone, the immediately looked back. “Yeah, I’m doing great too” I said, sarcastically, leaving the room.

As I walked towards the kitchen, I felt an increasing sense of dread form. I have no idea why, but I was reminded of the strange dream I had in the van. As I was right outside the kitchen, my gut was basically screaming at me to get away from here, but I ignored it and opened the door.

I wish I had listened to my gut.

In the kitchen, instead of Zack sitting at a table with a half-eaten slice of BS Pie next to him like I expected, there was a large goat woman (Who I immediately recognized as Toriel from Undertale) standing with an empty plate at the table Zack was sitting at. It didn’t take me long to put two and two together. Zack had transformed into Toriel, and judging by the look on her face, lost his memories in the process.

I was suddenly hit by a massive headache as I fell to the ground, a blinding light filling the room. A voice was screeching in my head over and over ‘You can’t save them, You can’t save them, You can’t save them’. “S-Stop, please stop” I yelled grabbing my head. The voice echoed in my head as scenes of destruction from the dream I had played over and over in my head.

Then everything returned to normal.

I was standing in the kitchen, but Zack (or I guess Toriel) was gone, and the empty plate was still there. I dropped to my knees, a sinking feeling appearing in my gut. Zack was gone. He may have been turned into Toriel, but he lost his memories, making him basically dead. I managed to pick myself back off the ground and made my way over to the note that was with the now eaten pie.

Picking it up, I noticed something different about the note, the message had changed. Instead of the message about leaving us the BS Pie, it was replaced with one chilling phrase.

This is only the beginning

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His new diabolical plan is to force the world to watch the Emoji Movie.